My Cd Cover

I was wondering if you guys, my friends, could give me some feedback on the cover I designed for the CD I am recording. Any and all suggestions/criticism is welcome, but if you are going to say it sucks for some reason, PLEASE indicate a way I can make it better. Thanks! (Y)

BTW, in case you are wondering why there is so little color, it is because I am producing everything myself (music, CD's, CD cases/labels/covers, so I am trying not to go nuts with color ink- gotta keep it cheap! ;) )

-godpunk

#33922

Nice cover Godpunk. I like it. ^_^

#33923

Yep love it! i personally would like to see an example with the red stripe off centered.. this is to right (well behaved) in a way.

Love the simplicity.

#33927

It looks good, its got the whole "rebel" vibe going. On the back, you need to put a picture of yourself in a defiant pose. That would be super. (Y)

You gonna share your music here? Id love to hear it.

You should make the red stripe a littler bigger or bolder, because it doesn't stand out enough.

#33929

Thanks for the suggestions. :) Yeah, once the album is finished, I plan on sharing it w/ you guys. I was going to lock myself in and record tonight, but Cubase crapped out on me!!! :rant: Oh well.

-godpunk

#33941

@sone

[ Oo. Citizen Dildo .oO ]
:lol:

@godpunk I really like what that CD cover looks like its really awesome!

#33943

Originally posted by Aqua-girl@Jun 19 2003, 12:59 AM

Yep love it! i personally would like to see an example with the red stripe off centered..  this is to right (well behaved) in a way.

Love the simplicity.

Like she says. Let the red be off-center. (Y)

#33946

yeah put the red somewhere random....

also i think the writing would look better in a more scrawled font

like the tallys

edit: oh yeah congrats... otherwise it looks awesome :D

#33952

Yeah, even if you use a "typewriterish" font, you need to make it look a bit dirtier. It's a little clean and precise. Art is rarely clean and precise.

#33960

I like it so far, but I agree with fissyb and stefarkas. What do you think about these?

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#34037

Wow Ender, I really like the typeface on the bottom one! :own: What's it's name and where can I get it?

-godpunk

#34053

It is called "Punk kid" and can be found at www.dafont.com

#34055

I must say it is a very original and good idea Godpunk :D Nice cover, but i also agree, it is a bit "clean" ;)

#34056

I likes it very much, suits the name of the album very well..

..... hold on... that's not 1000 tallys! You're like Chips Ahoy, 1000 chips NOT in every bag! :D

seriously tho I like it

#34062

lol, there's actually 175 tally marks on the cover, and THAT took me long enough, thank you! :P

@Ender: Thanks bud!

-godpunk

#34068

really nice cover godpunk.

Tell us something about the album: are you alone? are you in a band? music style? instruments you play? how it has been recorded? money wasted?

I want to know everything!! :woot:

#34069

Thanks for asking Frenzy...guess I shoulda specified earlier :)

I am a solo artist. I have been in a few bands, but grew tired of the quibbling and arguing that come with bands, so I set out on my own. My musical style would probably best fall under the Rock genre, but I have many many influences across all genres, and all of them are bound to affect my sound, so the final record may be somewhat ecclectic; hard to say at this point. I can play guitar, bass guitar, and some piano. For this record though, I plan to only use my acoustic guitar, and maybe include some piano. No drums. As far as money goes, I haven't spent much yet. My dad found a copy of Cubase at the thrift store for me (talk about a steal!), and besides that, just the cost of blank CD's, jewel cases, CD labels, and paper for the cover- all of which I should be able to earn back by selling copies of the CD. So as far as $ goes, things are working out. I guess if you count the cost of the iBook I use to record, then I've spent $1700+ :P Hope that answers all your questions!

EDIT: About the recording methods- I plug my guitar into my amp, then run a line out of my amp to the iMic, a 1/8" mic jack that plugs into the USB port in my iBook. Since the iMic utilizes USB and is external, it eliminates the hum you get when using an internal sound card. From the iMic, the signal goes into Cubase, where it is processed and recorded. When it is recorded, I mix down the vocal and music tracks and voila, a song! :)

-godpunk :rock:

#34072

that's cool man, it's like a small recording studio...

I use to write my songs too (I play the guitar) and once I recorded a demo tape (really bad sound quality) with one of my friends, he was the singer and I played the acoustic guitar but that's all. We were like a miniband for personal joy, no concerts, no proffesional recordings but it was real fun.

Hope to hear some of your songs. Keep rockin' :rule:

#34078

That looks nice. it is better than most covers you see in the shops...

#34085

Great work. Gets a (Y) from me

#34088

Revision 1

-Replaced courier text with "Punk Kid" (thanks again for the brilliant idea, Ender!)

-Moved red tally off-center

-Made red tally more prominent

The best part? I didn't have to redraw ANY of it! (God, I love Photoshop! :D)

Tell me what you think of this one.

-godpunk

#34091

looks better, ALOT better

#34093

Now THAT'S rebelious. Looks great Godpunk. I just hope your music is as great as the cover. (Y)

#34102

looks awesome

good luck with the release

#34108

@godpunk, that guy from the white stripes looks like one of my classmates last year. Just felt like sharing...

The new design looks really good! Keep up the god work... ;)

Don't be too rebelious if you know what I'm saying. ;)

#34113