Need help of native English speakers

Hello guys, when I represented my portofolio in a favourable light for a review, somebody noticed that English on the website just doesn't make any sense and has some linguistic mistakes.

Please help me to show them up and write the expressions right.

Thanks in advance.

#494966

I dont see any English Mistakes... Your page looks fine.

#495322

Cheers, mate.

#495331

There's nothing technically wrong, but it just reads a bit awkward.

Webblab is an online portfolio of a freelance designer based in Tallinn.

I design websites, stationery and branding with the focus on good design, user experience and accessibility.

Currently, I'm available for design jobs if the offer is interesting enough, so feel free to contact me using the form or e-mail me directly.

Here's what I'd write:

Webblab is the online portfolio of freelance designer YOUR NAME, based in Tallinn.

I design websites, stationery and branding; focusing on good design, user experience and accessibility.

Currently, I'm available for design jobs if the offer is interesting enough, so feel free to contact me using the form or e-mail me directly.

Oh, and I'm not sure I'd write "if the offer is interesting enough", if I were you. Might be safe just to leave that out.

Cheers, and nice website!

#495981

Your grammar seems fine. The reader seems to have the mistake in correcting you.

#505151

Well English is just as good as it gets. Grammar is of no problem these days with E-mail developing a whole new world of the English language.

#510655

jana?

Shut the **** up, grammar is the very structure of language, and I love it.

#510658

I design websites, stationery and branding with the focus on good design, user experience and accessibility.

Currently, I'm available for design jobs if the offer is interesting enough, so feel free to contact me using the form or e-mail me directly.

#514428

jana?

Shut the **** up, grammar is the very structure of language, and I love it.

Ya! I is agree with you!

Sorry, my english is not enough of understanding.

#515178

what ? i dont see any english....

#515297

English is perfect .There is no question of English grammar but you need to write the content with technical aspect of your niche.

#539685