LemonLime

Hey,

Just looking for some feedback on my personal/portfolio site. Trying to get back into designing (seems like a waste to sit all summer and not accomplish anything or better mysefl).

http://lemonlime.50webs.com

thanks

#402786

Looks sweet, Ashiaveli.

#402788

I think it looks nice, although the one thing I would change is to make those fruits to the left of the "LemonLime" text opaque, but that's just me.

#402796

nice, maybe a separator from the news on the right from the main body in the centre so its not crowded when you get going..

good luck!

#402816

Your portfolio is empty :confused:

#404270

^haven't put in content yet, trying to finalize the site design first.

#404272

The Freehostia.com link on the right side doesn't work. Not bad, though .

-NC

#404273

Looking at the code:

- lot's of divs, maybe too many

- paragraphs are a bit messed up: take away the BRs and close the P tags

- lots of Javascript stuff is loaded, but not used at the moment

- css is a bit... "uh :confused:"

Looking at the page:

- the main text could be a bit bigger: remember 11-13 words for line, on average, are the best for reading

- wider margins on the sides ?

- bigger titles ( and make them eadings ! )

- horizonal separators ?

if you don't use a map for the navigation menu, you could have some hover effect - now it's a bit boring. UL/LI are a good alternative. Take a look around for existing designs, and some good tutorials.

#404275

^great reply

first time doing css so it is messy. will try to clean it up. dunno about the JS..gonna go and look at the code. paragraphs same deal.

as for freehostia..gotta change it using 50webs now and it's even better.

UPDATE: added to the portfolio.

#404279