Aqua-Soft Forumsi thought i just might try making these...but i dont think they turned out the way i wanted them to...
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25404156/
any suggestions?
[release] dual suns
Hmmm, well, I actually like it. I think the sun in the background was better done than the one in the front--it just seems more real somehow.
Good job!
-NC
I like it - but here are some suggestions... don't take it the wrong way I'm only trying to help here!
Both suns look very 'cut out'. I would suggest using a range of soft focus/blurs to blend the edges into the background more. The glow on the suns looks unrealistic. I would suggest toning down the glows and perhaps extending the range. Also the balance of the piece of off. Perhaps moving one of the suns closer to the bottom right and enlarging it would help this? Also a bit more tonal and colour variation would add impact.
thnx for the advice!