[rel] A Song I Recorded

http://www.xiflproject.org/staff/adam/outofreach.mp3

Opinions, suggestions, complaints, and hate mail are appreciated. Note: I know it's really quiet, I haven't had a chance to gain it up yet.

#331799

It's not awful, but the generic pop punk power riff is wayyyy to prominate throughout the whole song, you need to add some variation in there, but obviously it's just a bass, and drums or drum kit, don't know. You need to open up your voice more too, if you can, don't know how good you are at singing or what not, in doing so also, if you're voice starts to crack, try having some honey, or a drink with honey, it helps with the vocal chords. Otherwise, for the genre that it appears to be in (which by the way, you missed the trend, everything's all sad nowadays) it's not too shabby for a little solo project.

#331821

Thanks for the feedback. It was going to be a little project, and it turned into a slightly bigger project.

#332046

uh..... how old r u?

its pretty good and i agree with oxideous(honey does work )

but i would like to know, how u get that techy-ish kinda fuzz in your voice?

if you took that out it would be a lil bit nmore better

#343672

I'm 15, as my profile says Anyway (talk about bringing a thread back from the grave) that was a very poor recording- I couldn't get one of my studio engineers to help me that day, so I ended up recording the vocals in the control room. The buzz is probably what's left of the equipment noise from the room But either way, that recording was trash. I wrote another song, and I'm going to record it and produce it, and it'll probably take longer.

#343681