[help] Creating Anime Club Advertisements

I am working on a series of Anime Club advertisements to replace our "Domokun" blitz. This is what it looks like so far, but I think that I can do better on source pics...

Tell me what you think, and how to improve them.

Advertisement 1

Advertisement 2

Advertisement 3

Advertisement 4

I am using Fireworks because of seemless Japanese Character integration, but can switch to Photoshop at any time.

(the first advertisement should be familiar to those who look at the screenshot thread -- THANKS TO WHO SUBMITTED IT AGAIN)

Also, please tell me about errors in my Japanese. I kinda used Babel Fish and kept it simple to avoid errors, but it's probably wrong. Help there would be cool!

#231276

lmao, we have Anime Club at my school, they just held a little candy/bakesale thing afterschool.

#231435