[release] Eclipse
I love it
:rock:
Nice! (Y)
it's kinda okay...but it could do with jazzing up a bit...not much here to hold me for too long...
..good first attempt though
could you be more specific about "jazzing up" thanks for the input, appreciated
well, it's just a bit...well...dull!
I would look at perhaps doing something with the eclipse itself...
1) The colour gradients are too pixelated
2) Using the outgoing lines is good, but you do so much more with them (shear, glows, brush effects, etc)
3) A nice 'diamond' effect on the edge of the eclipse would make it look good
4) Since you have used a kinda digital effect on the lines, then perhaps some pseudo blocks of text would add to it
Just some thoughts!!
nice work photo ![]()
cool...
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