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#1 User is offline   sascha Icon

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Posted 18 March 2008 - 08:16 AM

Hello guys, when I represented my portofolio in a favourable light for a review, somebody noticed that English on the website just doesn't make any sense and has some linguistic mistakes.

Please help me to show them up and write the expressions right.

Thanks in advance.
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#2 User is offline   purry Icon

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Posted 21 March 2008 - 05:10 PM

I dont see any English Mistakes... Your page looks fine.
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#3 User is offline   sascha Icon

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Posted 21 March 2008 - 06:08 PM

Cheers, mate.
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#4 User is offline   nicholasheer Icon

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Posted 27 March 2008 - 01:17 AM

There's nothing technically wrong, but it just reads a bit awkward.

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Webblab is an online portfolio of a freelance designer based in Tallinn.
I design websites, stationery and branding with the focus on good design, user experience and accessibility.
Currently, I'm available for design jobs if the offer is interesting enough, so feel free to contact me using the form or e-mail me directly.


Here's what I'd write:

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Webblab is the online portfolio of freelance designer YOUR NAME, based in Tallinn.
I design websites, stationery and branding; focusing on good design, user experience and accessibility.
Currently, I'm available for design jobs if the offer is interesting enough, so feel free to contact me using the form or e-mail me directly.


Oh, and I'm not sure I'd write "if the offer is interesting enough", if I were you. Might be safe just to leave that out.

Cheers, and nice website!
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#5 User is offline   spatzky Icon

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Posted 13 July 2008 - 01:31 PM

Your grammar seems fine. The reader seems to have the mistake in correcting you.
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#6 User is offline   jana Icon

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Posted 02 October 2008 - 09:28 PM

Well English is just as good as it gets. Grammar is of no problem these days with E-mail developing a whole new world of the English language.
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#7 User is offline   Phoshi Icon

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Posted 02 October 2008 - 10:16 PM

jana?

Shut the **** up, grammar is the very structure of language, and I love it.
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Posted 13 November 2008 - 07:03 PM

I design websites, stationery and branding with the focus on good design, user experience and accessibility.
Currently, I'm available for design jobs if the offer is interesting enough, so feel free to contact me using the form or e-mail me directly.
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#9 User is offline   KAWSquared Icon

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Posted 19 November 2008 - 02:52 AM

Phoshi;510658 said:

jana?

Shut the **** up, grammar is the very structure of language, and I love it.


Ya! I is agree with you!

Sorry, my english is not enough of understanding.
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#10 User is offline   nodeffect Icon

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Posted 19 November 2008 - 11:17 PM

what ? i dont see any english....
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#11 User is offline   Anna Hussie Icon

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Posted 25 May 2011 - 02:42 AM

English is perfect .There is no question of English grammar but you need to write the content with technical aspect of your niche.
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